I hope you all enjoyed this chapter as much as I enjoyed making it! I will have a few announcements to make in the next couple of weeks so keep your heads up for that!
I LOVED IT. I can't wait for you to turn this into a comic someday? maybe? o3o
I'd buy it. C: Thanks for the awesome story!
edit: saw the update when it popped up on the 1st pg. of my favorited comics. Made my flippin' day.
@Estavia: I'm so glad you liked this chapter! It's my dream to one day publish a comic but I think I'll need to wait another year before I start a Kickstarter or anything... just to finish up this book and amass a big enough readership. Good to know that you would be willing to buy a hard copy of my comic though ;)
Thank you so much for reading!
@Stem: o3o Thank you for posting! I'm a bit disappointed in smackjeeves's "spotlight"ing tbh, lots of good comics get overlooked here.
@Estavia: yeh i know :/ one of the reasons why i'm thinking of setting up my own website soon. Pretty much unless you're a BL or pixel comic you're not gonna get a lot of attention here. oh wells
Yay! You're so great at portraying emotion and this chapter was full of it! Thanks for working so hard on your pages and story. It really pays off and we are loving it!
@dreager: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D
Awesome comic! I love the creativity and storyline. Keep up the great work. ^^
@PurpleChickenPineapple: Thank you! I definitely will! :D
An interesting tale. I think our dear shape-shifting friend could have been more mindful, and our young heroine a bit less reckless, but it does create some interesting conflict.
Also, is she enlarged because of the parasites?
@JackFrost21: I agree wholeheartedly that Khut could definitely be more mindful! Unfortunately they aren't used to looking out for another living being. Jas... will just do whatever she wants tbh haha.
Also Jas is bigger because of an artistic style shift, not the space lice.
I had always wanted to draw her as bigger and rounder, but didn't have enough experience drawing fatter bodies. After 4 months of life drawing classes though I think I've gotten the hang of it!
Sorry if the change is jarring though. You aren't the first one to remark on it haha...
@Stem: You COULD say the change was because of space lice. Unless you already defined their characteristics, which I have not read if they are.
@JackFrost21: No no Jas is very much a larger gal, space lice is not involved.
Guess you'll have to explain the change another way then. Or not.
@JackFrost21: but... I did? It's a stylistic shift in my art. I don't feel the need to explain it in the plot... because in the end it has no bearing on it.
But, I mean if you want to imagine a plot related reason I'm not gonna stop you.
@Stem: K. Looking forward to more.